bradygirl_12: (world's finest trio)
bradygirl_12 ([personal profile] bradygirl_12) wrote 2008-07-06 03:43 am (UTC)

Hmm...is this entire arc made up of just Bruce or Clark's POV? If so, perhaps you could save Dick's POV as a flashback in a future arc.

If you plan on using Dick's POV in this first arc in other chapters, then this chapter would fit.

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