bradygirl_12: (superman--batman (dance))
bradygirl_12 ([personal profile] bradygirl_12) wrote 2008-08-31 10:19 pm (UTC)

This really was gorgeous! I loved the fairy-tale style you chose to write this in. It fit so well and really did sound like a romantic story of old! Your descriptions in the beginning were absolutely lovely, and I could picture it all in my mind as clear as crystal!

Thank you, Genki! :)

I love fairytales and do some of my best writing for them. :)

Also, Bruce and Kal sounded so brave and beautiful, and I *really* enjoyed your romantic alien Superman XD

Thank you! Sometimes we just need to bring out alien Kal. :)

I think this line was my favorite: "He thought fondly of the light repast that would be waiting for him in the Castle, his loyal Chamberlain the finest baker in the land." Alfred being described as the 'finest baker in the land' made me giggle with glee XD; It was so apropos and cute!

*giggles*

I'm sure Alfred was proud! :)

This was a truly beautiful story! I really enjoyed it a lot ^^ Terrific job!
Genki1


I'm glad you did! :)

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