bradygirl_12: (superman--batman (dance))
bradygirl_12 ([personal profile] bradygirl_12) wrote 2008-09-05 04:51 pm (UTC)

That's just beautiful. Your writing is so poetic and the descriptions are wonderful.

*beams*

Thank you, SVGurl! :)

The moving star grew bigger until the form of a man appeared. Clothed in starlight, he hovered over the roof.

"Alone tonight?" asked the Angel.

"Yes."

Otherworldly blue eyes sparkled as the Shining One drifted closer.

"Not for long."

So cute! That totally melted my heart.

Great work! :D


I'm glad you enjoyed this, SVGurl! I had a great time writing it. I love fairytales! No secret there. ;)

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