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2008-10-28 06:37 pm (UTC)
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Oh, how adorable! I can't stop smiling now! I love the boys being all cute and happy. &hearts You do such a great job of writing them like that!
I can totally see Bruce preferring the family run stores over the huge chains. And Clark would fit in perfectly.
The dialogue was fantastic.
“You probably would have walked those two miles to give that penny back like he did when he accidentally overcharged that woman in his store.”
“Well, in those days a penny was hard-earned.”
Clark so would walk the two miles! Awww!
And the ending was just perfect.
Wonderful job!
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I can totally see Bruce preferring the family run stores over the huge chains. And Clark would fit in perfectly.
The dialogue was fantastic.
“You probably would have walked those two miles to give that penny back like he did when he accidentally overcharged that woman in his store.”
“Well, in those days a penny was hard-earned.”
Clark so would walk the two miles! Awww!
And the ending was just perfect.
Wonderful job!