bradygirl_12: (bruce--terry (pumpkin))
bradygirl_12 ([personal profile] bradygirl_12) wrote 2008-10-28 06:52 pm (UTC)

Oh, how adorable! I can't stop smiling now! I love the boys being all cute and happy. ♥ You do such a great job of writing them like that!

*beams*

Thank you! :)

I can totally see Bruce preferring the family run stores over the huge chains. And Clark would fit in perfectly.

Oh, yeah. Bruce is a quality-over-quantity kind of guy. ;)

The dialogue was fantastic.

"You probably would have walked those two miles to give that penny back like he did when he accidentally overcharged that woman in his store."

"Well, in those days a penny was hard-earned."

Clark so would walk the two miles! Awww!


He so would! :)

And the ending was just perfect.

Wonderful job!


Thank you, SVGurl! And congrats on getting your laptop back! More stories from you is good for us! :)

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