I love the way you've written the way of life on the island and both of them: Diana restless and naive, Hippolyta regal and responsible and concerned.
It's all perfectly understandable! Hippolyta learned a harsh lesson about the cruelties of the outer world, and a sheltered Diana is curious about that world.
And then that last line!!! EEEEEK! Perfect.
:)
Fabulous work with the whole outside world versus Diana's worldview and point of view concerning being somewhat... cutoff. Then OMG! The JET.
It's always the harbinger of the change in Diana's life. Pre-COIE, it was always the way her story was told.
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I love the way you've written the way of life on the island and both of them: Diana restless and naive, Hippolyta regal and responsible and concerned.
It's all perfectly understandable! Hippolyta learned a harsh lesson about the cruelties of the outer world, and a sheltered Diana is curious about that world.
And then that last line!!! EEEEEK! Perfect.
:)
Fabulous work with the whole outside world versus Diana's worldview and point of view concerning being somewhat... cutoff. Then OMG! The JET.
It's always the harbinger of the change in Diana's life. Pre-COIE, it was always the way her story was told.
Glad you liked this, Ava! :)