bradygirl_12: (clark--bruce (rainbow's freedom))
bradygirl_12 ([personal profile] bradygirl_12) wrote 2009-10-14 05:33 pm (UTC)

Lex is a good friend of Bruce in this series. I really like him especially in these last a few chapters.

I've enjoyed writing him in this series. :)

Jamie was amazing. :)

He's fun to write, too, and totally devoted to Lex! :)

YES! I was hoping Melody could help.

She was the designated helper since I got this idea of kidnapping Clark. :)

Melody shivered. Those three monsters together were up to something; she knew it.
Poor Melody. *Hugs her*


She knows from experience! :(

YAY for Lionel! He is not quite positive character – he has flaws. But I like the way he's been thinking about some things. And in this case with Bruce and Clark – he was great! And helping! Thanks for Lionel here.

Even in Smallville, Lionel isn't all bad. It's just that the good is deeply buried. ;)

"Let’s hope the cabin is the right place."
It sure is. Hurry up to save Clark, please!


Time's running out for our boy!

I was so glad to see in this chapter they finally figured out it could be Edmund who kidnapped Clark! I hope everything is going well and Caldwells get what they deserve!

Edmund will regret this little 'adventure', for certain.

I liked the way you wrote all characters in this chapter BradyGirl! I love the great relationship of Lex and Jamie and I could see again in this update how much they understand to each other and how important is Jamie in Lex's life. Lionel acted really great there and Melody and Diana were very helpful as well. I'm glad, Bruce and Clark have such people in their life!

Thanks for this chapter! :)
Can't wait for more!
LS.


Thanks, Lis!

Lex and Jamie are a secondary pairing but there will be chapters and scenes focused on them in the future. Lex plays a minor but important part in the next arc, and a very important role in Arc 7. Jamie, too! :)

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