bradygirl_12: (clark--bruce (rainbow's freedom))
bradygirl_12 ([personal profile] bradygirl_12) wrote 2009-10-19 03:18 am (UTC)

*bounces up and down*

A solid lead, a solid lead!!! Finally. Thank the Gods.

I love how you make Melody the helper in rescuing Clark.
And yeah for Lionel! Where I was worried he might have designs on Clark, he actually turned out to be a helper too.

Nice how masterfully you play the characters against their usually "behavior" and yet they are still recognizable.


Thank you! I'm glad the nuances are coming through but the characters are still recognizable. And I wanted Melody to be an important part of the rescue. I'm sure she's always wanted to pay Clark back for his rescue of her. :)

And I couldn't help to grin a bit about that:

No suprise that most churches in this universe won't have the manacled join the services. That would just point out societies hypocrisy, and they can't have this. *snorts*


Very true!

Of course our fellow "pagan" religions don't have such restrictions.
Very well done.


*takes a bow* :)

Clark and Diana and the abolitionists might free the salves and abolish slavery in the end, but I wonder how long it will take until freed slaves and their families are seen as normal citizens in this universe?

Very good point! Probably a very long time, if ever.

Thanks for a great chapter, now I hope Bats and Arrows are in time to free Clark before even more bad things happen to him, what Edmund already did invokes enough trauma. Poor Clark.

*hugs all*


Glad you enjoyed this, Bat-Angel! :)

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