ext_175594 ([identity profile] ilovetobefree.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] bradygirl_12 2009-10-29 09:07 pm (UTC)

And the sweets!
I love sweets. :)

He took a bite, the rich, spicy flavor crystallizing on his tongue, the sprinkle of cinnamon sweet and luscious.
Awwwww, such an amazing description!

“Exceptional.” Clark sighed in gustatory satisfaction. “Right, Pumpkin?”
Bruce’s eyes glittered. “Right, Muffin.”

Great dialogue. :)

He tasted Bruce.
Even yummier than a pumpkin muffin.

And lovely ending. :)

Thanks for the wonderful story!:)
LS.

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