svgurl ([identity profile] svgurl.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] bradygirl_12 2011-05-23 01:21 am (UTC)

I love this fairytale! Certainly not for children though. ;D I was laughing and smiling throughout. It was seriously everything I could've hoped for and more.

Festooned in strings of jewels that were every color of the rainbow, Lois wore a little tiara that was designed to look like a maid’s cap.
I love this call back to 'Odyssey' ... at least that's what I think you were going for?

It was also quite hot and yummy. Tess and all her beautiful slaves ... she's rather lucky, isn't she? I like the addition of Selina and Dinah. I was a bit sad when Dinah chose Lois but I am glad that you made everything better.

Wonderful job!

Thank you so much for this. ♥

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