As I was reading this, I could just feel the silence, and easily see it happening as if I was right there following it. It was beautiful, because I really love silence like that.
There was another part that particularly struck me.
the errant breeze blowing through the trees, their sighs echoing sadness from human hearts.
Haunting imagery. Wish I could put my thoughts down more coherently, but this was really like a breath of fresh air. Thank you. :)
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Date: 2007-01-29 08:43 pm (UTC)There was another part that particularly struck me.
the errant breeze blowing through the trees, their sighs echoing sadness from human hearts.
Haunting imagery. Wish I could put my thoughts down more coherently, but this was really like a breath of fresh air. Thank you. :)