Date: 2007-12-08 04:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] seanchai.livejournal.com
This is really good, and very touching. I really like the interaction between Steve and Tony. I can totally see Steve being a little sad this time every year. Also, Clint! And Timely comics! The idea of Steve working as a comic artist is wonderfully fitting.

And the hand holding at the end :).

The only thing is, that past the first few months he was unfrozen, Steve canonically doesn't suffer from depression except under extreme circumstances, while Tony on the other hand, has canonically suffered from depression since 1963. Sorry if you don't want any concrit; this really is good, I'm just overly nitpicky about characterization.
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