Date: 2011-12-05 05:59 pm (UTC)
Alfred led Clark upstairs to one of the many guest rooms. “Master Wayne’s bedroom is there and Master Richard’s is next to his.”
“Thank you, Alfred.”
“Anything that you need, please be sure to ask.”

Alfred was wonderful as always. :)

“Hey, it’s snowing!” Dick’s eyes sparkled, reflecting the glittering ornaments.
“And that means…” Bruce said dryly.
“Snowman time!” Dick finished his cookie and dashed out to the foyer.

I liked the dialogue. And the sparkle in Dick's eyes. :)

In less than five minutes Dick was outside, running around with his face upturned and his tongue out, tasting snowflakes. He fell to the ground and made a snow angel, then popped back up and began making a snowman as the snow came down hard and fast.
Dick is awesome! :D

As Clark watched Dick through the window, Bruce asked, “Do you want to join him?”
Clark smiled brightly. “Yes, I would.”

Great! :)

He needs to re-connect to Earth. Bruce went out to the foyer with Clark and shrugged on his coat. Finding out that he had a son and being separated from him can’t be easy, and his mother’s passing is the final straw.
Bruce can understand Clark's feelings so well. And I like his determination to help him.

“Are you sure this kid isn’t the Flash?” teased Clark as Bruce chuckled and Dick giggled.
*grin*

Bruce was struck by the picture Clark made with his eyes incredibly blue behind his glasses and his cheeks pink from the cold. Snow starred his hair and lashes as he laughed in pure joy.
Bruce’s heart ached with the beauty of it.
Oh, Clark.

Oh Bruce. I don’t blame him though. :)

After another snowman was made so the first one wouldn’t be lonely, according to Dick,
Smart boy.

Clark noticed how the candlelight accentuated the cheekbones of Bruce’s face. He was incredibly beautiful. Clark had always known this and had kept it close to his heart, even through all the long years in space as he searched for the remnants of Krypton.
Nice lines. :)

He looked over to see Dick’s eyes large in his face, the blue orbs shimmering with sympathy. For a moment he saw Jason, then blinked and said softly, “It’s all right, Dick.”
Dick smiled. “You’re back now."

Dick is such a sweetie. And Dick reminding Clark of Jason - that was perfectly written. :)

Excellent chapter Brady! I enjoyed the description of Wayne Manor, the tree and the discussion about those ornaments. All the ornaments were so amazing - especially the elephant ornament reminding Dick of the circus and the umbrella bauble from Alfred’s family. AWWW, and Clark talking about tradition in Kent's family - I loved that!
I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :)
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