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Title: Rainbow’s Freedom (Paradise Arc) (36/37)
Author: BradyGirl_12
Pairings/Characters: (this chapter): Hal/Steve, Dick, Roy, Melody, Ollie/Dinah, Clark/Bruce, Lex/Jamie, Madame Zee
Series Notes: In the 23rd century, Earth is a technologically-advanced society that practices the ancient institution of slavery. As Bruce and Clark continue to juggle being lovers as well as Master and slave, Bruce continues his Abolitionist work, and a shocking Family Secret is revealed. Meanwhile, the Queen Family welcomes a new member, and Steve and Hal meet their Destinies, although neither one realizes it yet. The entire series can be found here.
Genres: Drama, AU
Rating: (this chapter): G
Warnings: None
Spoilers: None
Summary: Madame Zee’s predictions are of Rainbows of Light…and coming Darkness.
Date Of Completion (First Draft): August 16, 2008
Date Of Posting: June 7, 2009
Disclaimer: I don’t own ‘em, DC does, more’s the pity.
Word Count: 1417
Feedback welcome and appreciated.
Rainbows
Swirl,
Twist,
Sparkle.
Clutch
At their
Ephemeral
Grace.
Seek
The one
Rainbow
Of Freedom.
Before the
Darkness falls.
XXXVI
DARKNESS COMING
Steve smiled as he pushed Hal’s wheelchair. Dick looked ready to cartwheel and Roy and Melody were equally excited.
Well, he couldn’t blame them. The street fair in Gotham during Halloween Week was exciting. The smell of fried dough and grilled sausage carried on the clear night air, stars sparkling overhead.
The vendors’ tents glittered with sequins and bright colors, pennants snapping in the breeze. Hawkers called at the crowds, trying to entice customers to sample their wares.
Dinah was as delighted as the children, bright-eyed and sparkling. She laughed as she put her arm around Ollie’s waist. Bruce and Lex walked with their pleasure slaves, and the entire party was enjoying a good time.
As he pushed Hal along, Steve watched a dark-haired belly dancer jangle and jingle as she moved in gold and silks, giving prospective customers a sample.
He stopped walking abruptly.
“Diana…” he said softly.
The Amazon smiled at him as she swirled her veils, turning around in a whirl of color. She turned back, and she was once again the original dancer.
“Stevie?”
Hal was looking up at him. Steve quickly smiled and resumed pushing. “Having fun?”
Hal’s voice was contemplative. “Great time. You?”
“You know this is my favorite time of year.”
Hal was facing forward again as they trailed their group. “You had another dream last night.”
“Everyone has dreams.”
“You sounded upset.”
“You know dreams are weird.”
“Was it the crash again? You were yelling, ‘No!’”
“Eh, you know soldiers have memories we’d rather forget.”
Hal said nothing further, for which Steve was grateful.
“Ah, Madame Zee,” said Bruce, stopping at the glittering black-and-yellow striped tent with the sign proclaiming palm and Tarot readings. “Any takers?”
“I’ll go.” Steve stepped forward, heart pounding. He needed answers. Maybe Madame Zee could provide them.
“All yours.”
Steve entered the tent, recognizing the familiar hangings and art on the canvas walls. The rich colors soothed him, and he stood in front of the table covered in dark-blue silk with gold tassels. The pewter dragon’s ruby eyes winked in the light of an old-fashioned oil lantern, coiled as the base for the crystal ball.
He breathed in the patchouli scents, trying to calm his racing pulse. He wished he could get rid of these jitters.
“Welcome, Major.”
Steve jumped. “Oh, hello, Madame Zee.”
“Please have a seat.”
Steve sat in the black, lacquered chair, glad that the fortuneteller could not see his hands, which were knotted up in his lap.
Zee was dressed as she always was: in the traditional costume of peasant blouse and voluminous skirt, the blouse squash-colored and the skirt a deep blue. Bracelets and necklaces jingled as she moved, huge gold hoop earrings swinging from her ears. She wore a blue bandanna patterned with yellow stars over long, blond hair.
“Let us begin.”
Zee shuffled the Tarot cards. “Your Path has grown since last we met, Major.” She frowned slightly. “Your journey…you’ve met a Priestess.”
“A Princess, actually.”
“Close enough.” Her slight smile amused Steve. “I see…a Trinity.”
“A Trinity?”
Zee’s bracelets jangled as she set down more cards. “One in your future.”
“How?”
Zee frowned again. “The cards are being opaque.” She gathered them up and set them aside. “We will try the ball.”
Steve watched as she passed her hand over the crystal ball, rainbow mists beginning to appear. Her eyes closed, sinking into the state of mind necessary to her divination.
“Blue…sea…air…white star in the sky…abyss…pain…the whipping post…bracelets…golden eagle…stars and stripes forever…”
Steve’s eyes widened. He saw misty shapes coalescing, breaking apart, ribbons of sparkles twisting and turning, rainbow colors filling the ball.
“...there is only one Freedom’s Rainbow…” her voice grew even softer “…blood of warriors mixed with bringers of peace…suffering…break the chains…the golden eagle soars with the silver star and emerald stone…free thy people!…serenity covers all…like a pink cloud falling…covers gently…wispy cotton candy…rainbow…rainbow…”
The Gypsy stopped, opening her eyes. “A Great Love.” She looked at Steve. “Your soulmate…Trinity…”
“What is this Trinity?”
She pulled her hand away. “I’m sorry; this isn’t an exact science.”
“I…I know.” Steve unclenched his fits. “Of course it isn’t.”
She looked at him sympathetically. “I would say that a new turn in your life has occurred.” Her eyes were shrewd. “You met the dark-haired woman of whom I spoke the last few years.”
“You’d be right.” He had remembered that when he’d arrived in Gotham with a fluttery feeling in his stomach.
“It troubles you?”
“This world troubles me.”
The fortuneteller sat back. “This universe is not a kind one.”
“Well, it’s the only one we have.”
Her eyes flickered. “Destiny is not always easy.”
“You believe in Destiny?”
“There are certain things that will be.”
“No matter what?”
“No matter what.”
Steve sighed. “You could be right.” He rose. “Thank you, Madame Zee.” He paid her and started to leave.
“Oh, Major?”
“Yes?”
“Send in the Prince.”
He smiled slightly. “Certainly.”
Once outside, Steve was met with teasing, and he responded in kind, hiding his inner turmoil. “Madame Zee is insightful, witty, charming…unlike you guys.”
Laughter and more teasing answered him, and he said playfully, “Hey, Prince, Madame Zee wants you next.”
“Oh, ho, then let the Prince go.” Ollie bowed and Dina curtsied, Bruce grinning. He waved his hand airily.
“In I go. Thank you, peasants.”
Lex put his arm around Dick and drew Clark to him by tugging gently on the arm to stand beside him. Satisfied that his slaves were protected, Bruce went inside the tent.
“Welcome, Prince Bruce.”
Bruce inclined his head, acknowledging the respect. He sat down in the chair that Steve had just vacated, curious to hear this year’s reading.
Zee shuffled the cards, laying them out one-by-one. “I see…a contentment in you…and joy even greater than last I saw you…”
Bruce thought of Clark and Dick and nodded.
“You will know joy and…” she frowned. “…there is a Darkness coming…a Great Trial…testing your mettle and those you love…”
Bruce tensed, then forced himself to relax. This was all so vague. His life with filled with trials and tribulations.
“…beware the green wood…”
“The forest?”
“Perhaps.” Zee studied the cards. “Hmm, I think we should go to the ball.”
Bruce watched the mists begin to swirl as her hand moved over it, bracelets jingling. Rainbow colors began to sparkle, Bruce fascinated as always.
“There are many rainbows, but only one Freedom’s Rainbow.”
“What does that mean?”
A smile played around Zee’s lips. “Rainbows are ribbons of light and possibility, but Freedom requires only one.”
Oh, well, he’d asked.
Zee laughed. “I know, all very mystical. Sorry, dear Prince, but I can only tell what I see.” Her eyes grew dreamy as she gazed at the crystal ball.
Jingle, jingle.
“You lived in darkness…for many years…the pain of loss…shocking, terrifying, numbing….rage, a hollowness…the emptiness grows, the rage never lessens…until rainbows come into your life….sweet and sure and a Great Destiny awaits you…”
Bruce’s stomach tightened, remembering his great loss…he listened as the soft voice washed over him, smoothing away some of the pain.
I already have met my Destiny. The Bat was it, ultimately.
After his parents’ murders, it had been inevitable.
“…the Rainbow cleaves…Darkness spills over…engulfing, smothering…more pain…more…”
Zee abruptly stopped. She pulled her hand away from the ball, distress on her features.
“What Darkness?” Bruce felt a little foolish, but he was worried by her dire predictions.
But that’s all they are. Predictions. No one can tell the future.
“I’ll try again.”
The mists grew brighter, almost eye-aching. Bruce tried to make out what Zee saw, but if she truly had a gift, it didn’t translate to him.
“A Great Trial…my Prince, are you ready to face true evil?”
He thought of the Joker and other forces of darkness. “I am.”
“Good. You will need great strength, great courage.” The mists began to fade, leaving the crystal clear. “Wear thy armor. Protect.”
As Bruce merged from the tent, he shivered in the clear night air.
Clark came up to him. “Is everything all right, Master?” he asked softly.
Bruce looked at Clark and grasped his hand, squeezing tightly.
“As long as I have you.”
Clark’s smile was a blaze of sunshine in the evening darkness.
Bruce saw the happily chattering Dick with Melody and Roy.
He would protect his family with everything he had.

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Author: BradyGirl_12
Pairings/Characters: (this chapter): Hal/Steve, Dick, Roy, Melody, Ollie/Dinah, Clark/Bruce, Lex/Jamie, Madame Zee
Series Notes: In the 23rd century, Earth is a technologically-advanced society that practices the ancient institution of slavery. As Bruce and Clark continue to juggle being lovers as well as Master and slave, Bruce continues his Abolitionist work, and a shocking Family Secret is revealed. Meanwhile, the Queen Family welcomes a new member, and Steve and Hal meet their Destinies, although neither one realizes it yet. The entire series can be found here.
Genres: Drama, AU
Rating: (this chapter): G
Warnings: None
Spoilers: None
Summary: Madame Zee’s predictions are of Rainbows of Light…and coming Darkness.
Date Of Completion (First Draft): August 16, 2008
Date Of Posting: June 7, 2009
Disclaimer: I don’t own ‘em, DC does, more’s the pity.
Word Count: 1417
Feedback welcome and appreciated.
Swirl,
Twist,
Sparkle.
Clutch
At their
Ephemeral
Grace.
Seek
The one
Rainbow
Of Freedom.
Before the
Darkness falls.
The Freedom Chronicles
2363 C.E.
DARKNESS COMING
Steve smiled as he pushed Hal’s wheelchair. Dick looked ready to cartwheel and Roy and Melody were equally excited.
Well, he couldn’t blame them. The street fair in Gotham during Halloween Week was exciting. The smell of fried dough and grilled sausage carried on the clear night air, stars sparkling overhead.
The vendors’ tents glittered with sequins and bright colors, pennants snapping in the breeze. Hawkers called at the crowds, trying to entice customers to sample their wares.
Dinah was as delighted as the children, bright-eyed and sparkling. She laughed as she put her arm around Ollie’s waist. Bruce and Lex walked with their pleasure slaves, and the entire party was enjoying a good time.
As he pushed Hal along, Steve watched a dark-haired belly dancer jangle and jingle as she moved in gold and silks, giving prospective customers a sample.
He stopped walking abruptly.
“Diana…” he said softly.
The Amazon smiled at him as she swirled her veils, turning around in a whirl of color. She turned back, and she was once again the original dancer.
“Stevie?”
Hal was looking up at him. Steve quickly smiled and resumed pushing. “Having fun?”
Hal’s voice was contemplative. “Great time. You?”
“You know this is my favorite time of year.”
Hal was facing forward again as they trailed their group. “You had another dream last night.”
“Everyone has dreams.”
“You sounded upset.”
“You know dreams are weird.”
“Was it the crash again? You were yelling, ‘No!’”
“Eh, you know soldiers have memories we’d rather forget.”
Hal said nothing further, for which Steve was grateful.
“Ah, Madame Zee,” said Bruce, stopping at the glittering black-and-yellow striped tent with the sign proclaiming palm and Tarot readings. “Any takers?”
“I’ll go.” Steve stepped forward, heart pounding. He needed answers. Maybe Madame Zee could provide them.
“All yours.”
Steve entered the tent, recognizing the familiar hangings and art on the canvas walls. The rich colors soothed him, and he stood in front of the table covered in dark-blue silk with gold tassels. The pewter dragon’s ruby eyes winked in the light of an old-fashioned oil lantern, coiled as the base for the crystal ball.
He breathed in the patchouli scents, trying to calm his racing pulse. He wished he could get rid of these jitters.
“Welcome, Major.”
Steve jumped. “Oh, hello, Madame Zee.”
“Please have a seat.”
Steve sat in the black, lacquered chair, glad that the fortuneteller could not see his hands, which were knotted up in his lap.
Zee was dressed as she always was: in the traditional costume of peasant blouse and voluminous skirt, the blouse squash-colored and the skirt a deep blue. Bracelets and necklaces jingled as she moved, huge gold hoop earrings swinging from her ears. She wore a blue bandanna patterned with yellow stars over long, blond hair.
“Let us begin.”
Zee shuffled the Tarot cards. “Your Path has grown since last we met, Major.” She frowned slightly. “Your journey…you’ve met a Priestess.”
“A Princess, actually.”
“Close enough.” Her slight smile amused Steve. “I see…a Trinity.”
“A Trinity?”
Zee’s bracelets jangled as she set down more cards. “One in your future.”
“How?”
Zee frowned again. “The cards are being opaque.” She gathered them up and set them aside. “We will try the ball.”
Steve watched as she passed her hand over the crystal ball, rainbow mists beginning to appear. Her eyes closed, sinking into the state of mind necessary to her divination.
“Blue…sea…air…white star in the sky…abyss…pain…the whipping post…bracelets…golden eagle…stars and stripes forever…”
Steve’s eyes widened. He saw misty shapes coalescing, breaking apart, ribbons of sparkles twisting and turning, rainbow colors filling the ball.
“...there is only one Freedom’s Rainbow…” her voice grew even softer “…blood of warriors mixed with bringers of peace…suffering…break the chains…the golden eagle soars with the silver star and emerald stone…free thy people!…serenity covers all…like a pink cloud falling…covers gently…wispy cotton candy…rainbow…rainbow…”
The Gypsy stopped, opening her eyes. “A Great Love.” She looked at Steve. “Your soulmate…Trinity…”
“What is this Trinity?”
She pulled her hand away. “I’m sorry; this isn’t an exact science.”
“I…I know.” Steve unclenched his fits. “Of course it isn’t.”
She looked at him sympathetically. “I would say that a new turn in your life has occurred.” Her eyes were shrewd. “You met the dark-haired woman of whom I spoke the last few years.”
“You’d be right.” He had remembered that when he’d arrived in Gotham with a fluttery feeling in his stomach.
“It troubles you?”
“This world troubles me.”
The fortuneteller sat back. “This universe is not a kind one.”
“Well, it’s the only one we have.”
Her eyes flickered. “Destiny is not always easy.”
“You believe in Destiny?”
“There are certain things that will be.”
“No matter what?”
“No matter what.”
Steve sighed. “You could be right.” He rose. “Thank you, Madame Zee.” He paid her and started to leave.
“Oh, Major?”
“Yes?”
“Send in the Prince.”
He smiled slightly. “Certainly.”
Once outside, Steve was met with teasing, and he responded in kind, hiding his inner turmoil. “Madame Zee is insightful, witty, charming…unlike you guys.”
Laughter and more teasing answered him, and he said playfully, “Hey, Prince, Madame Zee wants you next.”
“Oh, ho, then let the Prince go.” Ollie bowed and Dina curtsied, Bruce grinning. He waved his hand airily.
“In I go. Thank you, peasants.”
Lex put his arm around Dick and drew Clark to him by tugging gently on the arm to stand beside him. Satisfied that his slaves were protected, Bruce went inside the tent.
“Welcome, Prince Bruce.”
Bruce inclined his head, acknowledging the respect. He sat down in the chair that Steve had just vacated, curious to hear this year’s reading.
Zee shuffled the cards, laying them out one-by-one. “I see…a contentment in you…and joy even greater than last I saw you…”
Bruce thought of Clark and Dick and nodded.
“You will know joy and…” she frowned. “…there is a Darkness coming…a Great Trial…testing your mettle and those you love…”
Bruce tensed, then forced himself to relax. This was all so vague. His life with filled with trials and tribulations.
“…beware the green wood…”
“The forest?”
“Perhaps.” Zee studied the cards. “Hmm, I think we should go to the ball.”
Bruce watched the mists begin to swirl as her hand moved over it, bracelets jingling. Rainbow colors began to sparkle, Bruce fascinated as always.
“There are many rainbows, but only one Freedom’s Rainbow.”
“What does that mean?”
A smile played around Zee’s lips. “Rainbows are ribbons of light and possibility, but Freedom requires only one.”
Oh, well, he’d asked.
Zee laughed. “I know, all very mystical. Sorry, dear Prince, but I can only tell what I see.” Her eyes grew dreamy as she gazed at the crystal ball.
Jingle, jingle.
“You lived in darkness…for many years…the pain of loss…shocking, terrifying, numbing….rage, a hollowness…the emptiness grows, the rage never lessens…until rainbows come into your life….sweet and sure and a Great Destiny awaits you…”
Bruce’s stomach tightened, remembering his great loss…he listened as the soft voice washed over him, smoothing away some of the pain.
I already have met my Destiny. The Bat was it, ultimately.
After his parents’ murders, it had been inevitable.
“…the Rainbow cleaves…Darkness spills over…engulfing, smothering…more pain…more…”
Zee abruptly stopped. She pulled her hand away from the ball, distress on her features.
“What Darkness?” Bruce felt a little foolish, but he was worried by her dire predictions.
But that’s all they are. Predictions. No one can tell the future.
“I’ll try again.”
The mists grew brighter, almost eye-aching. Bruce tried to make out what Zee saw, but if she truly had a gift, it didn’t translate to him.
“A Great Trial…my Prince, are you ready to face true evil?”
He thought of the Joker and other forces of darkness. “I am.”
“Good. You will need great strength, great courage.” The mists began to fade, leaving the crystal clear. “Wear thy armor. Protect.”
As Bruce merged from the tent, he shivered in the clear night air.
Clark came up to him. “Is everything all right, Master?” he asked softly.
Bruce looked at Clark and grasped his hand, squeezing tightly.
“As long as I have you.”
Clark’s smile was a blaze of sunshine in the evening darkness.
Bruce saw the happily chattering Dick with Melody and Roy.
He would protect his family with everything he had.
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Date: 2009-06-08 03:40 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-06-08 03:56 am (UTC)Thank you! :)
And why do you think the next arc is called 'The Dark Knight Of The Soul'? ;)
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Date: 2009-06-08 04:15 am (UTC)Basically, you rock.
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Date: 2009-06-08 04:24 am (UTC)Basically, you rock.
Aww! *blushes*
Thank you, sweetie! *hugs* :)
I can promise a lot of angst in the next arc, but not every chapter will be hand-wringing. You know me, I like a mix. ;)
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Date: 2009-06-08 03:33 pm (UTC)Thank goodness! I don't think I could take the stress...
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Date: 2009-06-08 04:19 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-06-08 06:25 am (UTC)You have me so excited now.
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Date: 2009-06-08 04:30 pm (UTC)Oh, yes.
You have me so excited now.
LOL!
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Date: 2009-06-08 12:32 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-06-08 04:36 pm (UTC)Fasten your seat belts! It's gonna be a wild ride!
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Date: 2009-06-08 03:37 pm (UTC)I'm excited for the wrap-up of this arc, but I hope you don't take too long a break before starting the next one! This story was my first LiveJournal find, and it's still one of my all-time favorites.
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Date: 2009-06-08 04:34 pm (UTC)It's the darkest one I've written, and will probably keep that title as I look at my outline.
I'm excited for the wrap-up of this arc, but I hope you don't take too long a break before starting the next one! This story was my first LiveJournal find, and it's still one of my all-time favorites.
*beams*
Thank you, Juniper! :)
I'd say I'm going to take a few weeks off once I finish the first draft of the 6th arc (very close to wrap-up there) and I'm not sure I'll long I'll take before I begin posting the 5th arc. I'd guess not too long, but after I finish each arc I've found it keeps my Muses refreshed to step back a little. I don't want to burn out.
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Date: 2009-06-09 01:31 pm (UTC)It's the darkest one I've written, and will probably keep that title as I look at my outline.
Wow. I was not suggesting that you change your title. I can't imagine that I would ever presume that far, but if I did you may be sure that I would not fail to capitalize the 's' in 'soul'. There was a question hovering there regarding the coming battle and by, for, and against whom it will be fought. Clearly my thinking here is somewhat nebulous, given my complete failure to communicate it. So I think I'm just going to sit back and see how events unfold.
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Date: 2009-06-09 04:59 pm (UTC)Keep up the comments! I love to know what's going on in my reader's heads. ;)
Your Destiny
Date: 2009-06-08 03:47 pm (UTC)So Lex is still the designated backup for protecting Dick and Clark. Given how children wander and what happened last year, I wonder if Lex considered putting Dick on a leash just for a short while. Clark can hang onto Dick's leash, and Lex could then keep a hand on Jamie and Clark and know that everyone is safe.
I hope Lionel warned everyone that Caldwell is crazy and lusting after Jamie and Clark.
Re: Your Destiny
Date: 2009-06-08 04:38 pm (UTC)Bruce is a little full of himself, or at least not open to the infinite perversity of the universe. What if his great destiny is to be the consort of the greatest ruler of the Kryptonians, and all his other activity is just a trivial prequel?
Exactly! When you're raised as the Prince of Gotham, you're going to be a bit arrogant, and he's also the head of his family with a lot of crushing responsibility, so I'll cut him some slack. ;)
So Lex is still the designated backup for protecting Dick and Clark. Given how children wander and what happened last year, I wonder if Lex considered putting Dick on a leash just for a short while. Clark can hang onto Dick's leash, and Lex could then keep a hand on Jamie and Clark and know that everyone is safe.
I think that Dick learned his lesson last year. :)
I hope Lionel warned everyone that Caldwell is crazy and lusting after Jamie and Clark.
I'm sure he'll mention it. He may be a rival to Lex in many things, but he has blood loyalty, too.
Re: Your Destiny
Date: 2009-06-08 05:02 pm (UTC)Yes, and so did Lex. Lex can have Clark and Jamie each hold one of Dick's hands and then Lex can hold Jamie's hand. Make truly sure the child isn't wandering off and that no one thinks that Jamie is unprotected.
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Date: 2009-06-08 03:53 pm (UTC)And poor Steve, he really is missing Diana.
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Date: 2009-06-08 04:40 pm (UTC)*grins*
And poor Steve, he really is missing Diana.
He really is. :(
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Date: 2009-06-08 04:48 pm (UTC)“You’d be right.” He had remembered that when he’d arrived in Gotham with a fluttery feeling in his stomach.
Wow, Steve has remembered the Madame Zee words.
All those prophecy about his destiny, Diana, Hal’s questions and Steve’s thoughts and dreams – that has to be confused for him now. But I’m sure he will understand in the future. :)
Poor Bruce. The prediction sounded so darkly and threateningly. Anyway, I was glad for this line:“ until rainbows come into your life….sweet and sure and a Great Destiny awaits you…”“ – I think there sure is a hope in this.
Clark came up to him. “Is everything all right, Master?” he asked softly.
Bruce looked at Clark and grasped his hand, squeezing tightly.
“As long as I have you.”
Clark’s smile was a blaze of sunshine in the evening darkness.
I loved these lines. They two are so strong together, giving support, hope and love to each other. They have to go through all the bad and dark days in the future together and win. I believe! *Hugs them both*
Though it wasn’t a very happy chapter, I loved it! A lot! You wrote it all excellently!
I dare to hope the last chapter of this Arc will be happier. *Crosses fingers*
But even if not, I’m looking forward to reading it. :)
Thanks for sharing. :)
LS.
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Date: 2009-06-08 05:27 pm (UTC)Yes, foreshadowing seemed necessary here!
"You’d be right." He had remembered that when he’d arrived in Gotham with a fluttery feeling in his stomach.
Wow, Steve has remembered the Madame Zee words.
All those prophecy about his destiny, Diana, Hal’s questions and Steve’s thoughts and dreams – that has to be confused for him now. But I’m sure he will understand in the future. :)
Oh, yes! :)
Steve is a bit predisposed toward mysticism (must be his Celtic blood, LOL) and that makes him a good match for Diana.
Poor Bruce. The prediction sounded so darkly and threateningly. Anyway, I was glad for this line: "until rainbows come into your life...sweet and sure and a Great Destiny awaits you..." – I think there sure is a hope in this.
There's always hope! :)
Clark came up to him. "Is everything all right, Master?" he asked softly.
Bruce looked at Clark and grasped his hand, squeezing tightly.
"As long as I have you."
Clark’s smile was a blaze of sunshine in the evening darkness.
I loved these lines. They two are so strong together, giving support, hope and love to each other. They have to go through all the bad and dark days in the future together and win. I believe! *Hugs them both*
Yes, their love is what's holding this series together! :)
And they'll need that love in the coming days.
Though it wasn’t a very happy chapter, I loved it! A lot! You wrote it all excellently!
I dare to hope the last chapter of this Arc will be happier. *Crosses fingers*
But even if not, I’m looking forward to reading it. :)
Thanks for sharing. :)
LS.
*grins*
Thanks, L.S.! :)
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Date: 2009-06-08 06:21 pm (UTC)Madam Zee did have a lot to say without really telling them anything. *pout* I just knew it wasn't going to be good news for Bruce and his clan. I just have to hold out the hope that whatever it is it will only bring them closer and make them stronger once they get through it. Or I can sit here wringing my hands until the next few posts. *g*
I know that Bruce is a smart man. With these heads up and with what Lionel will tell them about Edmund I'm hoping he will be able to do the "protect" part and be ahead of the game. Sometimes even though we know something is going to happen it is still out of our hands to actually prevent it. Looking forward to more.
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Date: 2009-06-08 06:35 pm (UTC)Yay! A fellow Halloween fan! :)
Madam Zee did have a lot to say without really telling them anything. *pout* I just knew it wasn't going to be good news for Bruce and his clan. I just have to hold out the hope that whatever it is it will only bring them closer and make them stronger once they get through it. Or I can sit here wringing my hands until the next few posts. *g*
*grins*
Hopefully my other stories will keep you entertained until the 5th arc begins! :)
I know that Bruce is a smart man. With these heads up and with what Lionel will tell them about Edmund I'm hoping he will be able to do the "protect" part and be ahead of the game. Sometimes even though we know something is going to happen it is still out of our hands to actually prevent it. Looking forward to more.
Steel is stronger when forged through fire.
And sometimes no matter what you do to protect, you lose.
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Date: 2009-06-08 06:47 pm (UTC)NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! So I guess I sit here wringing my hands. *sniffle*
Of course I enjoy your writing so I am sure I will be entertained until the 5th arc. I just don't know if I can last until then. lol
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Date: 2009-06-08 06:52 pm (UTC)NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! So I guess I sit here wringing my hands. *sniffle*
LOL! I think you'll have to. ;)
Of course I enjoy your writing so I am sure I will be entertained until the 5th arc. I just don't know if I can last until then. lol
*grins*
Well, I'm thinking of a seaside story with my fave couples, Clark/Bruce and Steve/Diana if I can get it to work, and at least one more beach story with another pair. :)
Oh, and the Bruce/Jim mega-angst plot bunny is REALLY nipping at my ankles! ;)
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Date: 2009-06-08 07:05 pm (UTC)bruce/jim...you mean jim as in Jim Gordon? Hmmmm, I've never considered this pairing. Could be interesting now that I think about it.
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Date: 2009-06-08 11:00 pm (UTC)Snap to it! ;)
bruce/jim...you mean jim as in Jim Gordon? Hmmmm, I've never considered this pairing. Could be interesting now that I think about it.
I have some stories already written with them, and the
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Date: 2009-06-09 03:44 am (UTC)But... gods, her *predictions*! O_O Trinity, YES! But the great darkness, true evil, the cleaving of the rainbow! *whimper*
*hides under a blanket and shivers*
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Date: 2009-06-09 04:04 am (UTC)It wouldn't be Halloween Week without her! :)
But... gods, her *predictions*! O_O Trinity, YES! But the great darkness, true evil, the cleaving of the rainbow! *whimper*
*hides under a blanket and shivers*
*tosses another blanket*
*nods*
True evil is alive and well. :(