I love this. Love the interaction between Melvin and Johnny, as always, especially the dialog and Johnny's honesty. Also, lol forever at "Sleeping Beauty" and "Agent Purty."
Johnny and Mel have a nice rhythm going. :) And Johnny just loves his little endearments. :)
Also, I must mention how much I love that you incorporate poetry at the beginning of each chapter. As an English major, I am an absolute sucker for poetry of any sort.
Thank you! I make no claim to good poetry, but it's fun to see what my brain comes up with for each chapter. :)
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Date: 2009-08-16 05:33 pm (UTC)*giggles*
I can't help it! I love cliffies! ;)
I love this. Love the interaction between Melvin and Johnny, as always, especially the dialog and Johnny's honesty. Also, lol forever at "Sleeping Beauty" and "Agent Purty."
Johnny and Mel have a nice rhythm going. :) And Johnny just loves his little endearments. :)
Also, I must mention how much I love that you incorporate poetry at the beginning of each chapter. As an English major, I am an absolute sucker for poetry of any sort.
Thank you! I make no claim to good poetry, but it's fun to see what my brain comes up with for each chapter. :)
Can't wait to read more of this!
There will definitely be more! :)