The Korlons were stronger and not afraid to use that strength on Dick, who despite knowing all the techniques taught to him by Bruce, couldn’t get away and even if he did, he was worried that his friends would be killed. Well, Dick wouldn't do anything to put his friends into danger.
He began to feel panic. What if he couldn’t get out of this one? Poor Dick. *hugs him*
As he fell to his knees, already losing consciousness, he thought of Bruce, who would blame himself. I’m sorry, Bruce, and then darkness closed in as rough hands seized him. His last memory was about Bruce – that was so touching!
A well-aimed decorative stone knocked the dagger out of the chief priest’s hand. Perfect!
Before Vale could get up, Clark and J’onn flew down and knocked over the band of approaching guards like bowling pins. Clark tossed Hal his ring. WOW! I was hoping Clark would appear! Perfect timing! :)
“We’re clear!” Ollie shouted. “Good job finding that control box, Pretty Bird.” “Thanks, Archer.” Nice dialogue. *smile*
Neither man saw the shock and smiles surrounding them. *grins* I loved to see the smiles.
No more hiding. Dick’s arms went around Bruce as he passionately returned the kiss. AWWWWW!
Action, suspense, love, great description of the fights, amazing touching moments , lovely ending. Excellently done! Thanks for sharing, BradyGirl. :) LS.
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Date: 2009-08-18 07:52 am (UTC)Well, Dick wouldn't do anything to put his friends into danger.
He began to feel panic.
What if he couldn’t get out of this one?
Poor Dick. *hugs him*
As he fell to his knees, already losing consciousness, he thought of Bruce, who would blame himself.
I’m sorry, Bruce, and then darkness closed in as rough hands seized him.
His last memory was about Bruce – that was so touching!
A well-aimed decorative stone knocked the dagger out of the chief priest’s hand.
Perfect!
Before Vale could get up, Clark and J’onn flew down and knocked over the band of approaching guards like bowling pins. Clark tossed Hal his ring.
WOW! I was hoping Clark would appear! Perfect timing! :)
“We’re clear!” Ollie shouted. “Good job finding that control box, Pretty Bird.”
“Thanks, Archer.”
Nice dialogue. *smile*
Neither man saw the shock and smiles surrounding them.
*grins*
I loved to see the smiles.
No more hiding.
Dick’s arms went around Bruce as he passionately returned the kiss.
AWWWWW!
Action, suspense, love, great description of the fights, amazing touching moments , lovely ending.
Excellently done!
Thanks for sharing, BradyGirl. :)
LS.