Fortress Of Good Fortune

You wrote Clark/Oliver! Exciting! I thank the person who request this from the bottom of my heart. XD

Everything about this fic was amazing.

“C’mon, Clark,” he shouted over the howl of the wind, “Let’s go. Come on, Boy Scout, consider this your merit badge in survival skills.”
I laughed at this one. So Ollie. You totally nailed his voice.

In the glow of the firelight, Clark looked more beautiful than ever. Ollie had been in love with him for a long time. He just wished…
Aww, my heart broke for Oliver here. Actually my heart was in my throat for him most of this fic. What I love about your Oliver is that you see him the way that I see him- snarky but vulnerable. I like that he quietly loves Clark and would've kept doing so if Clark hadn't said anything. It's really what I feel he would do in canon. Sure, he's aggressive in some ways but when it comes to feelings, he's not as bold as he pretends to be. I love that you get that.

Speaking of your Clark, he's great too! I love when he makes the first move. I love the idea of Oliver reading to Clark in bed. What a sweet, domestic image. Made me smile.

And it went from cute to hot! Gah, you're good at that.

“No need.” Ollie grinned. “Next time.”
Clark smiled. “I like the sound of that.”

I like the sound of that too.

Fantastic job!

If you haven't done it already, you should post this to ollieville (Oliver slash comm) and unforeseen_love (Clark/Oliver comm). :)