Fic: Sacrifice (2/4)
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bradygirl_12Title: Sacrifice (2/4)
Author: BradyGirl_12
Pairings/Characters (this chapter): Bruce/Dick, Hal Jordan, Roy Harper, Ollie/Dinah, various other JLA’ers and Teen Titans
Genres: Angst, Challenge, Drama, Hurt/Comfort
Rating (this chapter): PG-13
Warnings: None
Spoilers: None
General Summary: A JLA and Teen Titans’ mission goes horribly awry on a primitive planet.
Chapter Summary: The heroes object to the sacrifice, naturally.
Date Of Completion: July 22, 2009
Date Of Posting: August 9, 2009
Disclaimer: I don’t own ‘em, DC does, more’s the pity.
Word Count: 554
Feedback welcome and appreciated.
Author’s Notes: Written for![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
silvertales for my Hurt/Comfort Fic Prompt Request. Pairing: Bruce/Dick. Prompt: Self-Sacrifice. :) :) and for my 2009 DCU Fic/Art Cast Of Thousands!!! Challenge.
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SPARKLING HEART
Vale sighed. These primitives! It was trying to say the least.
His assignment to foment war here on Korla had been going well, and the war was in its early stages. It would allow his people, the Varians, to mine for korzite without the nuisance of having to dispose of inquisitive Korlons, and even better, serve as a testing ground for their new wave of low-tech weapons.
The contingent of Earth’s heroes that had arrived (how the hell many heroes did that backwater planet have, anyway?) had been neutralized. They could have been either disposed of or sent on their way with some clever stratagems, but now the Kash had come to him and said that their religion demanded a sacrifice from among the prisoners. The senior official, Katine, could ‘see’ which one to choose. Vale had not asked for details.
Vale pushed back a lock of silky white hair. His light-blue skin and hair color had matched well with the Korlons, and dampened their xenophobia. They had been immediately suspicious of the different skin colors of the captured heroes, however.
Well, let them have their barbaric sacrifice. It was all mumbo-jumbo to him. He could never understand the religion-soaked, but then, his people had loosened themselves from the bindings of superstition generations ago. Their religion now was power and treasure.
Vale smiled.
& & & & & &
Dick felt his blood freeze. Hal stepped forward slightly and Bruce hissed. Dick could see Roy tense from the corner of his eye.
“We’re not going to hand over one of us to be killed.”
Hal’s voice was cold, the fingers of his right hand flexing, aching for his ring.
“The only way you will be permitted to leave is by allowing us to make this sacrifice.”
“And if we refuse?”
“We will kill you all.”
The Korlon gestured to his companion and the other man drew out a large green gem from his robe and held it out. A thin ray of emerald light lanced out and struck Roy in the shoulder, ripping a surprised cry of pain from him.
Dick immediately turned and started toward his friend.
“The next strike is at his heart.”
Dick looked at Roy, who was clutching his shoulder.
“Dick…”
Roy saw it in Dick’s eyes: for a moment, panic flared in his own, too.
Dick shook his head slightly, entreating Roy, and squared his shoulders.
“I’ll go.”
“Dick…”
Bruce’s voice was hoarse. Dick turned and smiled slightly, love and pain in his eyes. He gently rested a hand on Bruce’s knee, then turned away to face the Korlons.
The taller alien gestured to a guard, who unlocked the cell. Hal moved quickly, Dinah and Ollie joining him, and the green light burst forth in a fan of color. Dinah screamed as she fell, Ollie catching her. Hal froze and Dick whirled.
“Don’t!” He was also speaking to Roy, whose face was a picture of miserable frustration.
Dick turned back and the guards grabbed him, dragging him out. The cell door clanged shut behind them.
“Wait!” Hal called as Dick disappeared through the gates with his captors. The officials turned, and Hal asked, “Why Dick?”
“We always choose the one with the sparkling heart.”
The Korlons turned and walked away.
Bruce’s face was an agonized mask.
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Author: BradyGirl_12
Pairings/Characters (this chapter): Bruce/Dick, Hal Jordan, Roy Harper, Ollie/Dinah, various other JLA’ers and Teen Titans
Genres: Angst, Challenge, Drama, Hurt/Comfort
Rating (this chapter): PG-13
Warnings: None
Spoilers: None
General Summary: A JLA and Teen Titans’ mission goes horribly awry on a primitive planet.
Chapter Summary: The heroes object to the sacrifice, naturally.
Date Of Completion: July 22, 2009
Date Of Posting: August 9, 2009
Disclaimer: I don’t own ‘em, DC does, more’s the pity.
Word Count: 554
Feedback welcome and appreciated.
Author’s Notes: Written for
silvertales for my Hurt/Comfort Fic Prompt Request. Pairing: Bruce/Dick. Prompt: Self-Sacrifice. :) :) and for my 2009 DCU Fic/Art Cast Of Thousands!!! Challenge.SPARKLING HEART
Vale sighed. These primitives! It was trying to say the least.
His assignment to foment war here on Korla had been going well, and the war was in its early stages. It would allow his people, the Varians, to mine for korzite without the nuisance of having to dispose of inquisitive Korlons, and even better, serve as a testing ground for their new wave of low-tech weapons.
The contingent of Earth’s heroes that had arrived (how the hell many heroes did that backwater planet have, anyway?) had been neutralized. They could have been either disposed of or sent on their way with some clever stratagems, but now the Kash had come to him and said that their religion demanded a sacrifice from among the prisoners. The senior official, Katine, could ‘see’ which one to choose. Vale had not asked for details.
Vale pushed back a lock of silky white hair. His light-blue skin and hair color had matched well with the Korlons, and dampened their xenophobia. They had been immediately suspicious of the different skin colors of the captured heroes, however.
Well, let them have their barbaric sacrifice. It was all mumbo-jumbo to him. He could never understand the religion-soaked, but then, his people had loosened themselves from the bindings of superstition generations ago. Their religion now was power and treasure.
Vale smiled.
Dick felt his blood freeze. Hal stepped forward slightly and Bruce hissed. Dick could see Roy tense from the corner of his eye.
“We’re not going to hand over one of us to be killed.”
Hal’s voice was cold, the fingers of his right hand flexing, aching for his ring.
“The only way you will be permitted to leave is by allowing us to make this sacrifice.”
“And if we refuse?”
“We will kill you all.”
The Korlon gestured to his companion and the other man drew out a large green gem from his robe and held it out. A thin ray of emerald light lanced out and struck Roy in the shoulder, ripping a surprised cry of pain from him.
Dick immediately turned and started toward his friend.
“The next strike is at his heart.”
Dick looked at Roy, who was clutching his shoulder.
“Dick…”
Roy saw it in Dick’s eyes: for a moment, panic flared in his own, too.
Dick shook his head slightly, entreating Roy, and squared his shoulders.
“I’ll go.”
“Dick…”
Bruce’s voice was hoarse. Dick turned and smiled slightly, love and pain in his eyes. He gently rested a hand on Bruce’s knee, then turned away to face the Korlons.
The taller alien gestured to a guard, who unlocked the cell. Hal moved quickly, Dinah and Ollie joining him, and the green light burst forth in a fan of color. Dinah screamed as she fell, Ollie catching her. Hal froze and Dick whirled.
“Don’t!” He was also speaking to Roy, whose face was a picture of miserable frustration.
Dick turned back and the guards grabbed him, dragging him out. The cell door clanged shut behind them.
“Wait!” Hal called as Dick disappeared through the gates with his captors. The officials turned, and Hal asked, “Why Dick?”
“We always choose the one with the sparkling heart.”
The Korlons turned and walked away.
Bruce’s face was an agonized mask.
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Date: 2009-08-09 08:59 pm (UTC)Great installment!
Absolutely cannot wait for the next part!
Love the seeing the team like this--all for one and one for all and noble.
I'm worried for them, though!
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Date: 2009-08-09 09:07 pm (UTC)Great installment!
Absolutely cannot wait for the next part!
Shouldn't be too long coming. :)
Love the seeing the team like this--all for one and one for all and noble.
You know they ferociously protect their own! :)
I'm worried for them, though!
You probably should be!
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Date: 2009-08-09 11:03 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-09 11:13 pm (UTC)You have to have a scorecard with the Titans! ;)
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Date: 2009-08-09 11:28 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-09 11:35 pm (UTC)Yes, things are looking dark at the moment! :)
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Date: 2009-08-09 11:37 pm (UTC)The first part was particularly interesting. Can't wait for the third installment. Spectacular job as always.
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Date: 2009-08-09 11:41 pm (UTC)LOL! I know! Hands off the sparkly Robin! :)
The first part was particularly interesting. Can't wait for the third installment. Spectacular job as always.
Thank you kindly! :)
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Date: 2009-08-10 02:02 am (UTC)And poor, poor Bruce.
*waits eagerly for more.*
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Date: 2009-08-10 04:20 pm (UTC)And poor, poor Bruce.
All the boys need hugs desperately!
*waits eagerly for more.*
*grins*
There will be naked Dick with chains. And oils. Now, I wonder why I keep taking this boy's clothes off and chaining him up, not to mention all the oils? Hmm... ;)
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Date: 2009-08-10 02:00 pm (UTC)*waits agonisingly for the next part*
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Date: 2009-08-10 04:21 pm (UTC)I know! Silly aliens!
*waits agonisingly for the next part*
Working on it! :)
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Date: 2009-08-10 07:51 pm (UTC)Even though this makes the most sense from an anthropological point of view. One always sacrifices what one sees as the best or the brightest, or it is not a sacrifice???
Waiting with baited breath for the next part
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Date: 2009-08-11 04:52 pm (UTC)*grins*
Even though this makes the most sense from an anthropological point of view. One always sacrifices what one sees as the best or the brightest, or it is not a sacrifice???
Very good point!
Waiting with baited breath for the next part
Thank you, m'lady! :)
I hope to have it up soon. I'll be out the rest of the day and hope to catch up on stuff tomorrow here on LJ. :)
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Date: 2009-08-11 05:19 pm (UTC)Oh no! Please don't!
“Dick…”
Bruce’s voice was hoarse. Dick turned and smiled slightly, love and pain in his eyes. He gently rested a hand on Bruce’s knee, then turned away to face the Korlons.
Poor Dick and Bruce. *Hugs them both*
“We always choose the one with the sparkling heart.”
Well, I'm not surprised they noticed Dick's sparkling heart. He is so special. *Sigh*
The second part of this chapter was so intense and touching. Excellently written!
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Thanks for sharing. :)
LS.
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Date: 2009-08-11 05:33 pm (UTC)Oh no! Please don't!
Poor Dick.
"Dick..."
Bruce’s voice was hoarse. Dick turned and smiled slightly, love and pain in his eyes. He gently rested a hand on Bruce’s knee, then turned away to face the Korlons.
Poor Dick and Bruce. *Hugs them both*
The boys need hugs!
"We always choose the one with the sparkling heart."
Well, I'm not surprised they noticed Dick's sparkling heart. He is so special. *Sigh*
Very! That boy sparkles and shines and understands darkness, too. He just prefers the light in himself. :)
The second part of this chapter was so intense and touching. Excellently written!
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Thanks for sharing. :)
LS.
Thank you, m'dear! Glad you enjoyed it. :)
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Date: 2009-08-18 03:20 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-18 03:23 am (UTC)*grins*
I'm off to read the next part and comfort dick and bruce. *sniffle*
The boys definitely need comfort in this story! :)
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Date: 2009-08-18 06:01 pm (UTC)Hands off the one with the sparkling heart, you can't have him you brutes! None dares to separate the bat and his life-mate.
*Off to the next part*
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Date: 2009-08-19 01:21 am (UTC)Hands off the one with the sparkling heart, you can't have him you brutes! None dares to separate the bat and his life-mate.
*Off to the next part*
Dick as a Sparkling Heart just makes me smile. :)
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Date: 2009-09-06 03:36 am (UTC)LOL!
Glad it's a good thing! :)
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Date: 2009-11-04 04:13 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-11-04 07:12 pm (UTC)Yep, that's usually the pattern!
I certainly don't blame the others for trying to stop them, either. Damn.
I know! The JLA and Titans aren't about to let Dick go like a lamb to slaughter.