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bradygirl_12Title: Rainbow’s Freedom (The Dark Knight Of The Soul Arc) (12/38)
Author: BradyGirl_12
Pairings/Characters: (this chapter): Hal/Steve, Melody, Dick, Alfred, Ollie/Dinah (Ollie does not appear in this chapter), Clark/Bruce (Clark does not appear in this chapter)
Series Notes: In the 23rd century, Earth is a technologically-advanced society that practices the ancient institution of slavery. A Great Trial crashes down upon the House Of Wayne. Can Bruce and Clark’s relationship survive? Will the Family’s strength be enough to see them through this Time of Fear and Darkness? The entire series can be found here.
Genres: AU, Drama, Slavefic
Rating: (this chapter): PG-13
Warnings: None
Spoilers: None
Summary: Hal discovers a heartbreaking truth while Dinah and Alfred worry over Clark, Bruce, and Dick.
Date Of Completion (First Draft): October 16, 2008
Date Of Posting: September 29, 2009
Disclaimer: I don’t own ‘em, DC does, more’s the pity.
Word Count: 1248
Feedback welcome and appreciated.
Gingerbread
Is the taste
Of home.
XII
TEA AND GINGERBREAD
Hal wheeled himself into the hospital room, sighing as he saw Steve lying so pale in the bed.
Damned virus. They really should de-con better.
The virus brought back from Rigel had somehow gotten past the decontamination procedures. Luckily it hadn’t been a general flight but a military craft with only two people. The base here on the moon had been affected, but the virus had been contained.
Just our rotten luck to be up here.
Hal had been feeling better and had accompanied Steve to Moonbase Alpha. By a toss of the dice, Hal hadn’t fallen ill. He was getting stronger every day, and would be able to start walking again soon.
Now this.
Hal listened to the beeping machines and rested a hand on Steve’s arm.
Still too cold.
He missed Steve’s golden tan and beautiful smile.
And his heart.
It’s your own damned fault.
Hal gazed out at the blank moonscape, the Earth a stunning backdrop.
“Diana…my beautiful Angel…I’m so sorry…”
Who was this ‘Diana’ Steve had called for in his delirium, and how long had Steve been in love with her?
A moan from Steve caught his attention, and Hal quickly looked over at the bed.
“Right here, Stevie.”
Blue eyes fluttered open. “H…Hal?”
“Right here, buddy.”
Steve groaned, trying to move. “Limbs…so heavy.”
“It’s all right. It’s to be expected after what you went through.” Hal brushed back the hair from Steve’s eyes. “Don’t worry. You’re going to be fine now.”
Steve stared at Hal, then smiled. “Water,” he rasped.
Hal quickly poured a glass of water from the bedside pitcher, helping Steve drink it.
“Go back to sleep, Stevie. I’ll be right here when you wake up.”
Steve nodded, his eyes sliding shut.
Hal watched him sleep, sadness in his brown eyes.
& & & & & &
Bruce fell asleep at the computer, the bats squeaking overhead. Dick looked at him sadly.
Bruce had barely slept since Clark had been taken. It didn’t look like an exactly comfortable position, but Dick hated to wake Bruce up.
Melody crept over. “He’s so tired.”
Dick nodded. He slid out of his chair and escorted his friend to the Batmobile bay so they wouldn’t disturb Bruce.
“He won’t rest until we find Clark.”
“I know.” Melody sighed. “There’s just no leads, are there?”
“None.” Dick looked frustrated. “We got nothing from Z…Zucco.”
Melody frowned. “This is not good, Dick. There has to be some leads!”
Dick felt despondent. “We have to find him, Melody.” He blinked back tears.
Melody touched his shoulder. “We will, Dick.”
Dick smiled a little.
& & & & & &
Dinah sighed. She went into the kitchen, glad to see Alfred.
“This kitchen wouldn’t be the same without you, Alfred.”
“I should think so.”
Dinah smiled. “Mmm, that gingerbread smells heavenly.”
“Sit down, m’lady, and you shall have it warm from the oven.”
Dinah took a seat at the table and Alfred served the gingerbread, Dinah closing her eyes as she took a bite.
“Mmm.”
Alfred smiled as he took his seat. “I’m glad you enjoy it.”
“Alfred, you’re a marvel.”
“You are too generous, Mistress.”
Dinah squeezed his hand. “Not generous enough.” Her smile faded. “I’m worried about Bruce.”
“You should be.” Dinah withdrew her hand. “He hasn’t slept in nearly 48 hours.”
“Not surprising.”
“No.” Alfred stared at his plate of gingerbread. “It will kill Bruce if he loses Clark.”
Dinah noticed the lack of ‘Master’ in front of Bruce’s name. Her heart contracted as she knew how worried Alfred was.
“He’s had difficult losses.”
Alfred nodded. “And this one would be just as bad.”
Dinah’s eyes met Alfred’s. The truth of that statement stretched between them.
“How is Dick holding up?” she asked softly.
“A little better, but he loves Clark dearly.” Alfred picked up his fork. “They bonded instantly that terrible night at the circus.”
“Yes, Bruce told me.” Dinah ate another piece of gingerbread. “A very sad tale, but heartwarming as Dick instantly took to Clark.”
“It was quite heartwarming as Master Bruce described it. The child was in shock, still wearing his circus costume when brought home. Poor little soul.”
“He seems quite happy now, or at least, before Clark’s kidnapping.”
Alfred nodded. “Partly due to Clark.”
“Clark is such a sweet soul, isn’t he?”
“Very” Alfred took a bite. “He is…vulnerable.”
“Yes, that’s true.”
“Not just because he’s a slave.”
Surprised, Dinah cocked her head.
“He’s strong, do not ‘get me wrong’, as you say. Any slave must be to survive. Did Master Bruce tell you of what Clark suffered at the hands of the slavers?”
“No, but I can guess.”
“Yes, and even those imaginings do not quite live up to the actuality.”
Alfred rose and poured out two cups of tea after a silent inquiry of Dinah, who nodded. He brought over both cups and sat down again.
“He was also humiliated by the guards at Knickerbocker Hall the night before he was sold to Master Bruce. And who knows what else he suffered before that? He can’t remember.”
Dinah took a sip of tea. “I know. It can’t be easy.” She thought of Melody’s life before coming to her and Ollie.
“The point is that Clark is strong, but vulnerable. He has a goodness in him that attracts people, and sometimes those who want to hurt him.”
Dinah put her teacup in its saucer. “Vulnerability attracts the jackals.”
Alfred nodded. “Quite. The sweetness and genuine belief in the goodness of people makes him terribly vulnerable.”
Dinah felt fear curl through her. She had observed the same thing.
“Clark is…I wouldn’t say delicate. He has survived worse things than I ever knew, or Dick ever suffered, aside from the murder of his parents, of course, but as a slave…” Alfred sighed. “Dick has seen events that are difficult, especially for one so young, but he has survived. He is a strong little boy.” They both smiled. “He understands the way of things. Clark…Clark doesn’t remember this world’s harshness, and he is hurt by it frequently.”
“Do you mean, Alfred, that his gentleness makes him so empathic that he’s hurt by and vulnerable to this world’s cruelties, even more so than Dick?”
Alfred sighed. “Dick and Clark must be shielded, though Dick has seen more.”
“But if Clark’s so strong…”
“Even the strongest of us can break, Miss Dinah.”
Dinah thought of the screams in the night from Melody and Roy, children callously abused by sadistic Masters and a system that had been in place for hundreds of years.
She had seen enough of Clark to know that what Alfred said was true.
She sipped her tea. “We will find Clark, Alfred.”
“I certainly hope so, Miss Dinah. I miss our times together like this, chatting over tea and gingerbread.”
“He’s a very good companion, isn’t he?”
“Very good.” Alfred drank his tea. “He…I fear what he may be going through.”
Dinah nodded. “I understand.”
Alfred’s gray-blue eyes looked at her. “He is so vital to this Family, Miss Dinah: to me, to Dick, and to Master Bruce. We all need him.”
Dinah rested her hand on Alfred’s. “Ollie’s coming in with Roy tonight. We’re going to keep searching until we find him. That I vow.”
Alfred looked at her with respect, and she knew that she would never give up.
Author: BradyGirl_12
Pairings/Characters: (this chapter): Hal/Steve, Melody, Dick, Alfred, Ollie/Dinah (Ollie does not appear in this chapter), Clark/Bruce (Clark does not appear in this chapter)
Series Notes: In the 23rd century, Earth is a technologically-advanced society that practices the ancient institution of slavery. A Great Trial crashes down upon the House Of Wayne. Can Bruce and Clark’s relationship survive? Will the Family’s strength be enough to see them through this Time of Fear and Darkness? The entire series can be found here.
Genres: AU, Drama, Slavefic
Rating: (this chapter): PG-13
Warnings: None
Spoilers: None
Summary: Hal discovers a heartbreaking truth while Dinah and Alfred worry over Clark, Bruce, and Dick.
Date Of Completion (First Draft): October 16, 2008
Date Of Posting: September 29, 2009
Disclaimer: I don’t own ‘em, DC does, more’s the pity.
Word Count: 1248
Feedback welcome and appreciated.
Is the taste
Of home.
Emily Adams Cutler
"Yellow Roses And Other Poems"
1859 C.E.
TEA AND GINGERBREAD
Hal wheeled himself into the hospital room, sighing as he saw Steve lying so pale in the bed.
Damned virus. They really should de-con better.
The virus brought back from Rigel had somehow gotten past the decontamination procedures. Luckily it hadn’t been a general flight but a military craft with only two people. The base here on the moon had been affected, but the virus had been contained.
Just our rotten luck to be up here.
Hal had been feeling better and had accompanied Steve to Moonbase Alpha. By a toss of the dice, Hal hadn’t fallen ill. He was getting stronger every day, and would be able to start walking again soon.
Now this.
Hal listened to the beeping machines and rested a hand on Steve’s arm.
Still too cold.
He missed Steve’s golden tan and beautiful smile.
And his heart.
It’s your own damned fault.
Hal gazed out at the blank moonscape, the Earth a stunning backdrop.
“Diana…my beautiful Angel…I’m so sorry…”
Who was this ‘Diana’ Steve had called for in his delirium, and how long had Steve been in love with her?
A moan from Steve caught his attention, and Hal quickly looked over at the bed.
“Right here, Stevie.”
Blue eyes fluttered open. “H…Hal?”
“Right here, buddy.”
Steve groaned, trying to move. “Limbs…so heavy.”
“It’s all right. It’s to be expected after what you went through.” Hal brushed back the hair from Steve’s eyes. “Don’t worry. You’re going to be fine now.”
Steve stared at Hal, then smiled. “Water,” he rasped.
Hal quickly poured a glass of water from the bedside pitcher, helping Steve drink it.
“Go back to sleep, Stevie. I’ll be right here when you wake up.”
Steve nodded, his eyes sliding shut.
Hal watched him sleep, sadness in his brown eyes.
Bruce fell asleep at the computer, the bats squeaking overhead. Dick looked at him sadly.
Bruce had barely slept since Clark had been taken. It didn’t look like an exactly comfortable position, but Dick hated to wake Bruce up.
Melody crept over. “He’s so tired.”
Dick nodded. He slid out of his chair and escorted his friend to the Batmobile bay so they wouldn’t disturb Bruce.
“He won’t rest until we find Clark.”
“I know.” Melody sighed. “There’s just no leads, are there?”
“None.” Dick looked frustrated. “We got nothing from Z…Zucco.”
Melody frowned. “This is not good, Dick. There has to be some leads!”
Dick felt despondent. “We have to find him, Melody.” He blinked back tears.
Melody touched his shoulder. “We will, Dick.”
Dick smiled a little.
Dinah sighed. She went into the kitchen, glad to see Alfred.
“This kitchen wouldn’t be the same without you, Alfred.”
“I should think so.”
Dinah smiled. “Mmm, that gingerbread smells heavenly.”
“Sit down, m’lady, and you shall have it warm from the oven.”
Dinah took a seat at the table and Alfred served the gingerbread, Dinah closing her eyes as she took a bite.
“Mmm.”
Alfred smiled as he took his seat. “I’m glad you enjoy it.”
“Alfred, you’re a marvel.”
“You are too generous, Mistress.”
Dinah squeezed his hand. “Not generous enough.” Her smile faded. “I’m worried about Bruce.”
“You should be.” Dinah withdrew her hand. “He hasn’t slept in nearly 48 hours.”
“Not surprising.”
“No.” Alfred stared at his plate of gingerbread. “It will kill Bruce if he loses Clark.”
Dinah noticed the lack of ‘Master’ in front of Bruce’s name. Her heart contracted as she knew how worried Alfred was.
“He’s had difficult losses.”
Alfred nodded. “And this one would be just as bad.”
Dinah’s eyes met Alfred’s. The truth of that statement stretched between them.
“How is Dick holding up?” she asked softly.
“A little better, but he loves Clark dearly.” Alfred picked up his fork. “They bonded instantly that terrible night at the circus.”
“Yes, Bruce told me.” Dinah ate another piece of gingerbread. “A very sad tale, but heartwarming as Dick instantly took to Clark.”
“It was quite heartwarming as Master Bruce described it. The child was in shock, still wearing his circus costume when brought home. Poor little soul.”
“He seems quite happy now, or at least, before Clark’s kidnapping.”
Alfred nodded. “Partly due to Clark.”
“Clark is such a sweet soul, isn’t he?”
“Very” Alfred took a bite. “He is…vulnerable.”
“Yes, that’s true.”
“Not just because he’s a slave.”
Surprised, Dinah cocked her head.
“He’s strong, do not ‘get me wrong’, as you say. Any slave must be to survive. Did Master Bruce tell you of what Clark suffered at the hands of the slavers?”
“No, but I can guess.”
“Yes, and even those imaginings do not quite live up to the actuality.”
Alfred rose and poured out two cups of tea after a silent inquiry of Dinah, who nodded. He brought over both cups and sat down again.
“He was also humiliated by the guards at Knickerbocker Hall the night before he was sold to Master Bruce. And who knows what else he suffered before that? He can’t remember.”
Dinah took a sip of tea. “I know. It can’t be easy.” She thought of Melody’s life before coming to her and Ollie.
“The point is that Clark is strong, but vulnerable. He has a goodness in him that attracts people, and sometimes those who want to hurt him.”
Dinah put her teacup in its saucer. “Vulnerability attracts the jackals.”
Alfred nodded. “Quite. The sweetness and genuine belief in the goodness of people makes him terribly vulnerable.”
Dinah felt fear curl through her. She had observed the same thing.
“Clark is…I wouldn’t say delicate. He has survived worse things than I ever knew, or Dick ever suffered, aside from the murder of his parents, of course, but as a slave…” Alfred sighed. “Dick has seen events that are difficult, especially for one so young, but he has survived. He is a strong little boy.” They both smiled. “He understands the way of things. Clark…Clark doesn’t remember this world’s harshness, and he is hurt by it frequently.”
“Do you mean, Alfred, that his gentleness makes him so empathic that he’s hurt by and vulnerable to this world’s cruelties, even more so than Dick?”
Alfred sighed. “Dick and Clark must be shielded, though Dick has seen more.”
“But if Clark’s so strong…”
“Even the strongest of us can break, Miss Dinah.”
Dinah thought of the screams in the night from Melody and Roy, children callously abused by sadistic Masters and a system that had been in place for hundreds of years.
She had seen enough of Clark to know that what Alfred said was true.
She sipped her tea. “We will find Clark, Alfred.”
“I certainly hope so, Miss Dinah. I miss our times together like this, chatting over tea and gingerbread.”
“He’s a very good companion, isn’t he?”
“Very good.” Alfred drank his tea. “He…I fear what he may be going through.”
Dinah nodded. “I understand.”
Alfred’s gray-blue eyes looked at her. “He is so vital to this Family, Miss Dinah: to me, to Dick, and to Master Bruce. We all need him.”
Dinah rested her hand on Alfred’s. “Ollie’s coming in with Roy tonight. We’re going to keep searching until we find him. That I vow.”
Alfred looked at her with respect, and she knew that she would never give up.
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Date: 2009-09-30 01:16 am (UTC)Its so easy to feel the pain of this families loss of one so special to them. I want them to find him soon, and bring him home, and take care of him.
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Date: 2009-09-30 01:27 am (UTC)It was time to sing Clark's praises. :)
Its so easy to feel the pain of this families loss of one so special to them. I want them to find him soon, and bring him home, and take care of him.
He definitely needs to be back in the safe confines of home!
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Date: 2009-09-30 01:54 am (UTC)Looking forward to the next post.
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Date: 2009-09-30 01:59 am (UTC)Alfred is the head of the clan in a different way than Bruce, and he will hold them all together.
I almost hoped when Dinah thought about the children and how they were abused that she might put two and two together and suspect something, but no. *sniffle*
Nope! :)
Looking forward to the next post.
It should come quicker. I've been kind of caught up in other things lately. :)
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Date: 2009-09-30 02:48 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-09-30 04:08 pm (UTC)They definitely need huggles!
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Date: 2009-09-30 03:18 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-09-30 04:13 pm (UTC)Clark had a dose of medicine just before he was taken. He'll be fine physically for several days...but of course the weekend ends before then.
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Date: 2009-09-30 05:09 am (UTC)I'm really freeting over the lack of clues, but live in hope that Caldwell will somehow gloatingly tip his hand. Poor Clark, all alone!
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Date: 2009-09-30 04:14 pm (UTC)Clark needs protection whether he's super-powered or not. His compassion is his greatest strength and his greatest weakness.
I'm really freeting over the lack of clues, but live in hope that Caldwell will somehow gloatingly tip his hand. Poor Clark, all alone!
It's not good. :(
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Date: 2009-09-30 05:37 am (UTC)In a way that chapter hurt even more to read.It was heartwarming to read Alfred praising Clark, but to think how emotional vulnerable our Starchild really is...poor Clark, the Caldwells will find a way to use that against him.
48 hours have passed already? Oh I guess that means there are only 24 left before the weekend is over so Bruce come on time really runs out.
Poor Hal, having to find out that Steve fell in love with someone else, that's always hard to accept. Moonbase Alpha....lol those were the days of "Space 1999"......I'm feeling old now. *sigh*
Can't wait to read the next chapter, even if that means some very disturbing scenes at the cabin. *shivers uncomfortably*
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Date: 2009-09-30 05:10 pm (UTC)In a way that chapter hurt even more to read.It was heartwarming to read Alfred praising Clark, but to think how emotional vulnerable our Starchild really is...poor Clark, the Caldwells will find a way to use that against him.
Edmund can zero in on a slave's vulnerability with unerring precision. He knew how to get Clark into that alley.
48 hours have passed already? Oh I guess that means there are only 24 left before the weekend is over so Bruce come on time really runs out.
It's getting close! Though Clark was kidnapped before the weekend. So there's still time. :)
Poor Hal, having to find out that Steve fell in love with someone else, that's always hard to accept.
True. :(
Moonbase Alpha....lol those were the days of "Space 1999"......I'm feeling old now. *sigh*
I was a fan of that show! I especially liked Maya/Tony. :)
Can't wait to read the next chapter, even if that means some very disturbing scenes at the cabin. *shivers uncomfortably*
Heed the warnings!
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Date: 2009-09-30 06:45 pm (UTC)But back to the universe you created.....I see a small silver-lining that ****** ****** ****** Caldwell did spill it that he and his ****** ***** *********** sons will spend the weekend at the cabin "where no one can hear the screams". Some family gathering...eeeek.
Very clever bradygirl,so plain in sight jet so well hidden that information is. Very well done! I was wondering back then that much I even forgot to left feedback then....Tsk.
Of course the information is out there, now I wonder how it will travel to the manor fast enough? Hmmm.
Now some speculation:
I suppose Clark will leave the cabin either he escapes or the Caldwells move him to an illegal slave market. That "we kill you after we're done" might just have been another mind game, it's that old Caldwell ******* after all.
So Bruce is bound to be find his Starchild much later then I expected, and Clark might have to suffer even more then the Caldwells.Oh Rao.
*shivers*
And still I can't wait to read the next chapter.....*needs to know now, needs to know now*
Ahem.
:-)
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Date: 2009-09-30 06:52 pm (UTC)There were some good zines in the '70s and '80s for this show. :)
But back to the universe you created.....I see a small silver-lining that ****** ****** ****** Caldwell did spill it that he and his ****** ***** *********** sons will spend the weekend at the cabin "where no one can hear the screams". Some family gathering...eeeek.
Very clever bradygirl,so plain in sight jet so well hidden that information is. Very well done! I was wondering back then that much I even forgot to left feedback then....Tsk.
Ah ha! So you picked up on that! ;)
I always drop the foreshadowing shoe, m'dear. ;)
Of course the information is out there, now I wonder how it will travel to the manor fast enough? Hmmm.
*whistles innocently*
Now some speculation:
I suppose Clark will leave the cabin either he escapes or the Caldwells move him to an illegal slave market. That "we kill you after we're done" might just have been another mind game, it's that old Caldwell ******* after all.
Possibly. Then again, I wouldn't put it past Edmund to do just what he said.
So Bruce is bound to be find his Starchild much later then I expected, and Clark might have to suffer even more then the Caldwells.Oh Rao.
*shivers*
That's right.
And still I can't wait to read the next chapter.....*needs to know now, needs to know now*
Ahem.
:-)
*grins*
Well, I'll try and keep up a pace of every two or three days if I can. I have a lot of Halloween fic to type up for DC and PE, so we'll see. But I really want to get into the darkest chapters this month so that the healing can begin.
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Date: 2009-09-30 05:37 am (UTC)Hope life leaves you alone so that you can formulate the next chapter. Was checking several times a day even when I knew you wouldn't be posting that quickly. Your writing is just that good. :-)
Eva
Re: weekend
Date: 2009-09-30 05:14 pm (UTC)Not sure from the writing how soon the weekend is and with it the brothers arrival but I suspect the time to speculate and fear for the unknown only adds to Clark's trepidation. It has already been 48 hours.
Yeah, I kept it fluid because I figured I would mess up the chronology. ;) But the weekend hasn't arrived yet so there's still time!
Hope life leaves you alone so that you can formulate the next chapter. Was checking several times a day even when I knew you wouldn't be posting that quickly. Your writing is just that good. :-)
Eva
Aww, thank you, Eva! :)
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Date: 2009-09-30 09:33 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-09-30 05:18 pm (UTC)Thank you! I appreciate the heads-up, and glad you're enjoying the series! :)
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Date: 2009-09-30 04:11 pm (UTC)And Hal and Steve aren't having a very good time either, it seems that a black cloud has shrouded everyone. :(
I can't wait for the next part!
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Date: 2009-09-30 05:23 pm (UTC)She's got the right idea! :)
And Hal and Steve aren't having a very good time either, it seems that a black cloud has shrouded everyone. :(
Very much so. :(
I can't wait for the next part!
Thank you, Louise! :)
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Date: 2009-09-30 09:58 pm (UTC)Oh no! Poor Steve and Hal! *Hugs them*
By a toss of the dice, Hal hadn’t fallen ill. He was getting stronger every day, and would be able to start walking again soon.
I was glad to hear it. There were a lot sadness and bad things happened in those last chapters. It’s good to hear something pleasant. :)
Diana…my beautiful Angel…I’m so sorry…”
Who was this ‘Diana’ Steve had called for in his delirium, and how long had Steve been in love with her?
O-ow, I hope Hal can understand Steve’s feelings for Diana.
Hal watched him sleep, sadness in his brown eyes.
I’m sorry for Hal. But I hope things get better for him in the future. *Crosses fingers*
Melody frowned. “This is not good, Dick. There has to be some leads!”
Melody was right. There sure are some leads. They just have to find them! (And fast... Please!)
“This kitchen wouldn’t be the same without you, Alfred.”
Such true words!
“No.” Alfred stared at his plate of gingerbread. “It will kill Bruce if he loses Clark.”
It will. Alfred’s words got me thinking about Bruce and Clark – about the moment Bruce bought Clark as his bed slave, all the time that they lived together and how their relationship changed through the time. I can’t imagine Bruce’s life without Clark!
“Clark is such a sweet soul, isn’t he?”
He is!
“The point is that Clark is strong, but vulnerable. He has a goodness in him that attracts people, and sometimes those who want to hurt him.”
Alfred (and you :)) said it so well!
Alfred’s gray-blue eyes looked at her. “He is so vital to this Family, Miss Dinah: to me, to Dick, and to Master Bruce. We all need him.”
I absolutely agree. We all need him!
Amazingly written update BradyGirl! I loved to see Melody talking with Dick and Dinah-Alfred talk was so wonderfully done!
Thanks for sharing.
I’m looking forward to more. :)
LS.
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Date: 2009-09-30 11:14 pm (UTC)"No." Alfred stared at his plate of gingerbread. "It will kill Bruce if he loses Clark."
It will. Alfred’s words got me thinking about Bruce and Clark – about the moment Bruce bought Clark as his bed slave, all the time that they lived together and how their relationship changed through the time. I can’t imagine Bruce’s life without Clark!
So much has changed in such a short time!
"The point is that Clark is strong, but vulnerable. He has a goodness in him that attracts people, and sometimes those who want to hurt him."
Alfred (and you :)) said it so well!
Thank you! :)
Alfred’s gray-blue eyes looked at her. "He is so vital to this Family, Miss Dinah: to me, to Dick, and to Master Bruce. We all need him."
I absolutely agree. We all need him!
*nods*
Amazingly written update BradyGirl! I loved to see Melody talking with Dick and Dinah-Alfred talk was so wonderfully done!
Thanks for sharing.
I’m looking forward to more. :)
LS.
Thank you, Lis! Glad you enjoyed! :)
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Date: 2009-11-04 06:02 pm (UTC)And I just loved Alfred and Dinah's conversation. It's good for the freemen in this story to see more and more of what the slaves have gone through and continue to go through.
*hugs Clark tight*
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Date: 2009-11-04 07:46 pm (UTC)Yes! Diana haunts him, and there's Hal to consider. :(
And I just loved Alfred and Dinah's conversation. It's good for the freemen in this story to see more and more of what the slaves have gone through and continue to go through.
Everyone's getting an education.