Fic: The Better Angels (7/7)
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Author: BradyGirl
Pairings/Characters (this chapter): Clark/Bruce (Kal-El/The Angel Of Death), The Flying Graysons (John/Mary, Dick)
Genres: AU, Drama
Rating (this chapter): PG-13
Warnings: Not sure if warnings are necessary, but it’s quasi-religious imagery.
Spoilers: None
General Summary: Two Angels are sent on a Quest to find Pure Souls.
Chapter Summary: The Quest for Pure Souls ends in a circus tent.
Date Of Completion: May 1, 2008
Date Of Posting: June 10, 2008
Disclaimer: I don’t own ‘em, DC does, more’s the pity.
Word Count: 495
Feedback welcome and appreciated.
Author’s Note:
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Unfortunately, my Muses simply refused to cooperate, and I was on the verge of giving up, when I got this idea. It’s not quite what the requester wanted, but close! So I hope you like it,
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All chapters can be found here.
VII
QUEST’S END
There can be no Light,
Without Joy.
There can be Death
With Compassion.
Alyssa Amethyst
“Destined”
2008 C.E.
The circus grounds were alive with the smells of sizzling sausages and fresh peanuts, children scampering around with cotton candy and hawkers trying to lure customers to try their luck on the midway. The bellows of tigers and elephants mixed with the chattering of monkeys. Gaudily-striped tents of red-and-yellow billowed in the breeze, and inside the tents were lights, music, applause, derring-do, color…
The trapeze swung high over the ring, yellow-red-and-green sparkling and the smell of sawdust strong. Light and Joy filled the tent.
Death hovered over Haly’s Circus.
Kal watched as the circus acts played out. While his Light shone from the happy faces of performers and crowd, his companion’s shadow was there when a tiger swatted with a clawed paw or a trick rider came close to missing her footing after a somersault. The Quest was drawing to a close.
It was when the trapeze artists started their act that Kal-El’s wings tightened in anticipation. The family flew with grace and Joy, and their souls were Pure, the child’s Light so bright that Kal was nearly blinded.
The ropes broke, Kal catching the parents as Death touched them, and then the Dark Angel caught the child. Black wings enfolded the boy as Kal’s companion knelt on the sawdust-strewn floor.
Kal swiftly flew down to the ring, ready to touch the child and bring him home when he froze.
Death was in agony.
“I am sorry,” he whispered, the child’s big, blue eyes filled with Compassion, the small hand on the Angel’s arm. “I had to take them.”
“I know,” the child whispered back.
“I…Death took my parents, too.” The rasping voice was filled with pain. “That night, Death took hold of me, though I was unaware, but year-by-year, I grew deader inside, until I took the mantle.” His voice rang hollow. “Dead inside.”
The child’s shimmering eyes swam with Compassion. He reached out and pushed the black hood back.
Kal gasped.
He had half-expected a scarred visage, but this beauty! Suffering but fair of face, with dark hair and eyes of endless blue.
Kal’s wings shielded them all.
“I…” Death’s glove touched the child’s face. He looked up at Kal, shuddering with grief and desperation.
“It is all right, Beloved.” Kal reached out and touched his companion’s face. “There is always Hope.”
His Beloved’s eyes glimmered with tears, and he moaned.
White wings enfolded all three as the Light consumed all.
& & & & & &
From that day at the circus, it was said that Death was less cold and implacable in a world that knew more Love and Compassion.
It was said that the Angel of Death flew with Hope and Love, and if brightly-colored Joy and Compassion flew with them, what of it?
The world could always use more Pure Hope and Joy, and Death tempered with Compassion.
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Date: 2008-06-10 10:15 pm (UTC)Excellent! I like to be unexpected! ;)
The part where Kal saw Deaths face and saw the beauty was just one of the best moments. Well done!
Thank you, Zenith! :)
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Date: 2008-06-10 10:31 pm (UTC)The last part was just...perfect.
A wonderful fic.
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Date: 2008-06-11 12:07 am (UTC)The last part was just...perfect.
A wonderful fic.
Thank you, Green Eyes! :)
I'm so glad you liked it. :)
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Date: 2008-06-11 12:27 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-06-11 12:33 am (UTC)Thank you, Stalinglim! :)
I'm glad I could come up with the unexpected for you. :)
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Date: 2008-06-11 12:39 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-06-11 12:50 am (UTC)Thank you, Ranger Girl! :)
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Date: 2008-06-11 06:01 am (UTC)Amen. This was so beautiful and heart-wrenching, and above all hopeful. Bravo!
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Date: 2008-06-11 04:52 pm (UTC)Amen. This was so beautiful and heart-wrenching, and above all hopeful. Bravo!
Thank you, Kitsune! :)
This chapter had the most haunting quality of all for me when I was writing.
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Date: 2008-06-11 06:05 pm (UTC)*huggles Bruce* Poor baby!!
I'm glad he has Clark and Dick in his life! :) *pets them all*
This has been such a wonderful story, I'm quite sad to see it end! Can I hope for a sequel? ;)
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Date: 2008-06-11 06:13 pm (UTC)*huggles Bruce* Poor baby!!
He did have it rather hard in this story, didn't he?
I'm glad he has Clark and Dick in his life! :) *pets them all*
Things always go better with Clark and Dick! :)
This has been such a wonderful story, I'm quite sad to see it end! Can I hope for a sequel? ;)
Thank you, Star! :)
I'm going to try and wrap up a lot of other projects (including your birthday story!) but I had so much fun writing this I wouldn't rule out a sequel! :)
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Date: 2008-06-12 03:16 am (UTC)*applauds* ^_^
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Date: 2008-06-13 05:37 pm (UTC)*applauds* ^_^
Thank you, Saavi! :)
I'm very glad you enjoyed this story! :)
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Date: 2008-06-13 01:00 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-06-13 05:44 pm (UTC)Thank you, Jen! :)
Yep, could have gone all melancholy with this ending, but it just didn't go that way! :)
And of course Dick is Joy as well as Compassion. ;)
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Date: 2008-06-14 12:50 am (UTC)Wonderfully phrased! Of course Dick would feel compassion even for Death and not fear him. I wasn't expecting our favourite Robin to show up in this story, but his presence works in seamlessly and really brings it all together. Great job!
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Date: 2008-06-14 01:04 am (UTC)Wonderfully phrased! Of course Dick would feel compassion even for Death and not fear him. I wasn't expecting our favourite Robin to show up in this story, but his presence works in seamlessly and really brings it all together. Great job!
Thank you, Ladybug! :)
I hadn't intended for Dick to be in this story, but the Little Bird tapped me on the shoulder and whispered in my ear about this ending, and I couldn't resist my Dickie-bird! ;)
Very good observation about Dick not being afraid of Death. He has never been afraid of Bruce in any incarnation, though he has been afraid for him at times. Even Clark is a little afraid of the Bat, but Dick never is. Bruce was right when he called him 'fearless'.
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Date: 2008-06-15 02:32 am (UTC)Wow, I had wondered why Bruce couldn't take his hood off. I half expected he had to be in the mask (like Batman) in some way and wanted to hide it from kal. Hehe, I was totally wrong! XD But I'm really glad Kal could see his beautiful face at last. The eyes of endless blue! Wee!
I love how you used the wings in the story. Protective and... sensual. *^-^*
Wonderful ending with little blue bird and shining love, yay!
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Date: 2008-06-15 02:59 am (UTC)Wow, I had wondered why Bruce couldn't take his hood off. I half expected he had to be in the mask (like Batman) in some way and wanted to hide it from kal. Hehe, I was totally wrong! XD But I'm really glad Kal could see his beautiful face at last. The eyes of endless blue! Wee!
I toyed with making Bruce scarred of Bat-like, but thought it would be an interesting twist to make him "fair of face" instead. ;)
I love how you used the wings in the story. Protective and... sensual. *^-^*
I am inspired by your Clark/Bruce angel drawings! :)
Wonderful ending with little blue bird and shining love, yay!
Can't help myself with the little blue bird. ;)
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Date: 2008-06-28 09:04 pm (UTC)I was waiting for Little Bird all the time, and there he was, and healed Death wound's with his compassion and love.
*sniffles*
Just adorable!
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Date: 2008-06-28 10:02 pm (UTC)I was waiting for Little Bird all the time, and there he was, and healed Death wound's with his compassion and love.
*laughs* As you read more of my stuff, you'll realize that I slip the Little Bird in whenever I can. Not just because I want to see him (because I do) but because he's so important, not just for Bruce but for the whole DCU! :)
*sniffles*
Just adorable!
Thank you kindly! :)
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Date: 2008-06-29 07:10 am (UTC)And that's one of the reasons I like your stories so much, there is always a very good chance our Child of the Light will fly into your stories and make it all better at least for Bruce.
And he is of course the soul of the DCU, and since those idiots at DC editorial are way too dump to see it, Little Bird needs all the protection he can get from us.
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Date: 2008-06-30 12:19 am (UTC)And that's one of the reasons I like your stories so much, there is always a very good chance our Child of the Light will fly into your stories and make it all better at least for Bruce.
Oh, yes! Bruce desperately needs Dick in all 'verses! Without him he'd be lost. The few death stories I've written show Bruce completely shattered after the loss of Dick.
And he is of course the soul of the DCU, and since those idiots at DC editorial are way too dump to see it, Little Bird needs all the protection he can get from us.
He truly is! That was the theme of the Dick Grayson essay I wrote for
And he does need protection from DC, poor dear!
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Date: 2009-03-13 02:37 am (UTC)At least in the end he has his hope and love. This was so good. The mix of medieaval images with modern life was very interesting and it worked incredibly well.
I think the last line's going to stick with me for quite a while. :D
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Date: 2009-03-13 02:59 am (UTC)He suffers so beautifully, doesn't he? :)
At least in the end he has his hope and love. This was so good. The mix of medieaval images with modern life was very interesting and it worked incredibly well.
Thank you! This is definitely one of my favorites! :)
I think the last line's going to stick with me for quite a while. :D
*beams*
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Date: 2009-03-14 09:03 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-03-14 10:29 pm (UTC)Thank you! :)
And thanks for reading and commenting on every chapter! :)
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Date: 2009-03-14 10:31 pm (UTC)It was good for me to branch out and see dynamics in other pairings/fandoms.
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Date: 2009-03-14 10:42 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-18 03:34 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-08-18 06:29 pm (UTC)Thank you, m'dear! :)
The World's Finest Trio always seems to get together, don't they?
:)
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Date: 2010-04-21 05:07 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-04-21 05:17 pm (UTC)I'm glad you enjoyed it! And thank you for reading and commenting. :)